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Monday, June 17, 2019

the kid who turned into a superhero

  hey this poat is about an everyday kid who gets powers.

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  3. Hi im Riki and ethan i go to Papakura Central School maybey next time you can use your sword bye have a great day

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  5. Hi I am Alexia from Parkview Parua School.
    This is amazing Ollie you look great as a superhero.
    I think you’re really artistic.
    Next time you could add a background.
    Do you want to be a superhero when you grow up?

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  6. Hello I am from Parkview Parua.
    This is amazing because it looks like it is like a real animation.
    This reminded me of the time I watched another animation.
    Next time, you could say if there will be a part two
    Why did you just make it stop why could you not say like the end?

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  7. Hello oliver my name is blake and And I am from parkview parua school and I like your work it was one of the sec one I likes it is got sides how you did it and if you want to do more sides.

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