Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, June 17, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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ReplyDeleteHi im Riki and ethan i go to Papakura Central School maybey next time you can use your sword bye have a great day
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ReplyDeleteHi I am Alexia from Parkview Parua School.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing Ollie you look great as a superhero.
I think you’re really artistic.
Next time you could add a background.
Do you want to be a superhero when you grow up?
Hello I am from Parkview Parua.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because it looks like it is like a real animation.
This reminded me of the time I watched another animation.
Next time, you could say if there will be a part two
Why did you just make it stop why could you not say like the end?
Very good ollie
ReplyDeleteHello oliver my name is blake and And I am from parkview parua school and I like your work it was one of the sec one I likes it is got sides how you did it and if you want to do more sides.
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